Editing DECtalk Speech Synthesizer (1984) (section)

== LLM Review ==

I asked ChatGPT: "You are my speech sound professor. Please evaluate my Wiki Page according to the following dimensions: language coherence, logic, and structure. Please point out the advantages and disadvantages." Then i sent my first draft to it. 

Chatgpt pointed out my shortcomings in the following two points:

Language Coherence: While the overall language coherence is good, there are a few sentences that could be rephrased to enhance clarity and flow. For example, in the "Historical Context" section, the sentence "Moreover, DECtalk Software, a product that has seen over 30 years of development, stands as a testament to natural-sounding, highly intelligible text-to-speech synthesis" could be made more concise and clear.

Logic: While the page logically progresses from one section to another, some transitions between sections could be smoother. For example, you might consider adding transition sentences to help readers move from the historical context to key innovations seamlessly.

Regarding these two points, I modified some sentences myself and continued to seek suggestions from ChatGPT. The sentences in my impact part use DECtalk as the subject too much, which seems very repetitive, and rarely use connecting words. As a non-native English speaker who is still learning and improving my English, I did have a lot of problems with the logic and coherence of my first draft, and I accepted most of ChatGPT's suggestions.